Nice example to kids, and adults
Not all average adults are a good example for kids to follow. Adults need to show this kindness in daily life, in routine, not just talk about it. Showing this movie to kids might teach them better than an explanation gave by their parents or teachers.
About the animation: The opening part was a little akward. Try making it slower, and pick the key scenes that explain what your animation (or series, maybe) is about.
I know how hard it is to make a typography animation, making the words sync with the audio, and trying to express the feel of the conversation by a visual way.
I know that a typography animation doesn't need to be fully readable, depending on the audio, but I don't know if a serif type would be the best option to use, because it was kinda difficult to read - but that's only my opinion.
In overall, it is a really nice work!
(hope my english is good enough to understand!)
"So dont judge" ?
I'm sorry, but Newgrounds is a place where people submit their work, and receive feedback from other users. They do this in order to improve their skills, and if you wan't people to judge your work, you shouldn't submit it.
If you're willing to improve your skills, follow some flash tutorial on newgrounds, practice, ask people for help (if you need any), and when you are satisfied with your work, it's time to let people review it.
Well, after playing for HOURS, and getting all the shine sprites and coins, I can say that this is a incredible and fantastic game. There are some bugs that annoyed me, but it was OK in overall.
One thing that I would like to say, is that some Toads were really annoying. I assumed that talking to every one of them would help me, by getting some tips and clues. But there were a bunch of them that said totally useless things, like "hungry, hungry hungry, hungry hungry hungry...". I was wondering if it was supposed to be funny, because, if it was, it wasn't good enough. That's the main reason for me to give you a 9/10.
I hope this review is helpful to you. Your game was really entertaining to me!
Every effort in making Newgrounds a better place is totally valid and have my respect! If you are willing to make this guide more pleasent to watch, I suggest you to make something more "visual", like recording your explanation in audio and making an animation based on that. I believe it would the more fun to watch, and would be more compelling to people, making them really understand how important it is to flag correctly. Hope this review is helpful to you.
I don't have a microphone.
But yes, I can try to make it more visually attractive, I have the fla this time! I'll do it when I get a chance.
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